Pin-Up Girl .2

Pin-Up Girl 2

Ok this is the second sketch in my Pin-up Girls series. Tbh, I'm not 100% happy with it, I don't know why, I think Ive been looking at it for far too long. 

If anybody can tell me what that think, if you think there is something off with it or if it looks ok because I don't really wanna carry on with it if there is something wrong and I go past the point of changing it down the line. 

Pin-Up Girls .1

Pin-Up Girl Sketch 1

I thought for a change I would try drawing some new subject matters, so as I was watching TV I saw the advertisement on sky arts 1 programme about Dita Von Tesse and that's when I got the idea to do some classic drawings of Pin-Up Girls. So here is the first sketch of this new direction. More will come and they will have much higher quality, I just got excited and felt I needed to share this rough draft.